Starting Rumors (Mai-HiME)
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Starting Rumors (Mai-HiME)
by BMeph Fri Jan 06, 2012 9:41 pm
Just call me Kaiser, 'cause I'm on a Roll!
I wanted to do another one-shot, but I need more practice at writing in-the-small. Thus, my latest, a two- (really, three-) chapter spicy meatball, Starting Rumors.
It's really an Aoi/Chie/Nao story, but the Chie/Nao ship is the most important part. Still, Aoi is really the center of this story..."from a certain point of view".
Please, Read, Review and Enjoy!
I wanted to do another one-shot, but I need more practice at writing in-the-small. Thus, my latest, a two- (really, three-) chapter spicy meatball, Starting Rumors.
It's really an Aoi/Chie/Nao story, but the Chie/Nao ship is the most important part. Still, Aoi is really the center of this story..."from a certain point of view".
Please, Read, Review and Enjoy!
BMeph- Posts : 15
Join date : 2011-12-30
Age : 54
Location : San Diego, CA -
Re: Starting Rumors (Mai-HiME)
by Goggles Sun Jan 08, 2012 4:56 pm
Oh Mai Goodness! I love it! Makes me want to finish my huge cf cross over that involves kaorin from azumanga daioh, nao, and a few others.
Goggles- Posts : 29
Join date : 2011-12-11
Age : 34
Location : On A mountian in Washington State
Re: Starting Rumors (Mai-HiME)
by shanejayell Sun Jan 08, 2012 5:50 pm
Not bad. Might wanna space out the dialog more, makes it hard to read....
shanejayell- Posts : 157
Join date : 2011-12-17
Age : 51
Location : Canada
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