[Poem] She is a man
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[Poem] She is a man
by Blair Phoenix Mon Dec 19, 2011 1:23 pm
It's been a while since I've last made a poem. Feel privileged you all, I'm posting it here first 
She is a man like any other man
She has two arms and two legs and two hands
She has two eyes, a nose, mouth, and brown hair
Her heart beats blood and her lungs breath in air
She laughs at most jokes, and cries when she's sad
She's calm at most times, but scary when mad
Love is sometimes something keen on her mind
She says though, she hasn't seen the right signs.
She has a family, friends, and a job
She's even been meaning to get a dog
She lives in a house and drives in a car
She loves to sit and look up at the stars
As a human being, isn't she fine?
Or is your mind still stuck on the first line?
She is a man like any other man
She has two arms and two legs and two hands
She has two eyes, a nose, mouth, and brown hair
Her heart beats blood and her lungs breath in air
She laughs at most jokes, and cries when she's sad
She's calm at most times, but scary when mad
Love is sometimes something keen on her mind
She says though, she hasn't seen the right signs.
She has a family, friends, and a job
She's even been meaning to get a dog
She lives in a house and drives in a car
She loves to sit and look up at the stars
As a human being, isn't she fine?
Or is your mind still stuck on the first line?
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Re: [Poem] She is a man
by Blair Phoenix Mon Dec 19, 2011 4:59 pm
I take it that means I did a decent job? ^^ A little outside my normal box, but I just decided to roll with the idea anyways. Think it came out ok.shanejayell wrote:Aww. *thumbs up*
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Re: [Poem] She is a man
by Blair Phoenix Tue Dec 20, 2011 12:14 am
Aw, thanks DT ^^ It's always a plus to hear someone enjoyed your work.dragontiger96 wrote:I enjoyed it.
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Re: [Poem] She is a man
by Blair Phoenix Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:09 pm
Thank you ^^Kiros Razer wrote:I think it was nicely done.
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Re: [Poem] She is a man
by EsotericWhim Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:21 pm
I really do envy your writing abilities when it comes to poems, Blair.
A very touching and fluid piece.
A very touching and fluid piece.
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Re: [Poem] She is a man
by Blair Phoenix Sat Jan 07, 2012 9:32 pm
Thanks Whim ^^ Even though I don't think I'm all that great myself lol.EsotericWhim wrote:I really do envy your writing abilities when it comes to poems, Blair.
A very touching and fluid piece.
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Re: [Poem] She is a man
by Blair Phoenix Mon Jan 09, 2012 9:24 pm
Aw, I'm glad you enjoyed it Shaz! ^^Shaz wrote:I really enjoyed reading this
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Re: [Poem] She is a man
by Rosie Thu May 31, 2012 1:28 am
I don't mean to be the dud here, but I got several meanings out of this poem, and I'm not quite sure where you're going with this poem. I really like it! I just did not grasp the meaning as you probably implied it. At first I thought it might mean that a trans person is like everyone else...but then I was not sure.
Could you explain this to me? Or is it a post-Modern poem that focused on the individual's paradigm and the author as she/he was writing is no longer the same as now/and their meaning?I wanna know what it meant to you.
Im extremely sorry if I come off as rude. D:
Could you explain this to me? Or is it a post-Modern poem that focused on the individual's paradigm and the author as she/he was writing is no longer the same as now/and their meaning?I wanna know what it meant to you.
Im extremely sorry if I come off as rude. D:
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Re: [Poem] She is a man
by Blair Phoenix Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:19 pm
That's the thing about poetry. You're encouraged to come to your own conclusionMoonstone wrote:I don't mean to be the dud here, but I got several meanings out of this poem, and I'm not quite sure where you're going with this poem. I really like it! I just did not grasp the meaning as you probably implied it. At first I thought it might mean that a trans person is like everyone else...but then I was not sure.
Could you explain this to me? Or is it a post-Modern poem that focused on the individual's paradigm and the author as she/he was writing is no longer the same as now/and their meaning?I wanna know what it meant to you.
Im extremely sorry if I come off as rude. D:
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Re: [Poem] She is a man
by Rosie Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:37 pm
I wish i knew it's concrete meaning. ;_____;
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Re: [Poem] She is a man
by Blair Phoenix Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:15 pm
Silly MoonstoneMoonstone wrote:I wish i knew it's concrete meaning. ;_____;
. What's the fun in that?
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