[Poem] She is a man

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[Poem] She is a man

Post by Blair Phoenix on Mon Dec 19, 2011 1:23 pm

It's been a while since I've last made a poem. Feel privileged you all, I'm posting it here first Razz

She is a man like any other man
She has two arms and two legs and two hands
She has two eyes, a nose, mouth, and brown hair
Her heart beats blood and her lungs breath in air

She laughs at most jokes, and cries when she's sad
She's calm at most times, but scary when mad
Love is sometimes something keen on her mind
She says though, she hasn't seen the right signs.

She has a family, friends, and a job
She's even been meaning to get a dog
She lives in a house and drives in a car
She loves to sit and look up at the stars

As a human being, isn't she fine?
Or is your mind still stuck on the first line?
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by shanejayell on Mon Dec 19, 2011 2:52 pm

Aww. *thumbs up*
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by Blair Phoenix on Mon Dec 19, 2011 4:59 pm

shanejayell wrote:Aww. *thumbs up*
I take it that means I did a decent job? ^^ A little outside my normal box, but I just decided to roll with the idea anyways. Think it came out ok.
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by dragontiger96 on Mon Dec 19, 2011 9:17 pm

Very Happy I enjoyed it.
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by Blair Phoenix on Tue Dec 20, 2011 12:14 am

dragontiger96 wrote: Very Happy I enjoyed it.
Aw, thanks DT ^^ It's always a plus to hear someone enjoyed your work.
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by Kiros Razer on Fri Jan 06, 2012 9:09 pm

I think it was nicely done.
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Post by Blair Phoenix on Fri Jan 06, 2012 11:09 pm

Kiros Razer wrote:I think it was nicely done.
Thank you ^^
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by EsotericWhim on Sat Jan 07, 2012 1:21 pm

I really do envy your writing abilities when it comes to poems, Blair.

A very touching and fluid piece.
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by Blair Phoenix on Sat Jan 07, 2012 9:32 pm

EsotericWhim wrote:I really do envy your writing abilities when it comes to poems, Blair.

A very touching and fluid piece.
Thanks Whim ^^ Even though I don't think I'm all that great myself lol.
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by Shaz on Mon Jan 09, 2012 9:34 am

I really enjoyed reading this Smile
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by Blair Phoenix on Mon Jan 09, 2012 9:24 pm

Shaz wrote:I really enjoyed reading this Smile
Aw, I'm glad you enjoyed it Shaz! ^^
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by Rosie on Thu May 31, 2012 1:28 am

I don't mean to be the dud here, but I got several meanings out of this poem, and I'm not quite sure where you're going with this poem. I really like it! I just did not grasp the meaning as you probably implied it. At first I thought it might mean that a trans person is like everyone else...but then I was not sure.

Could you explain this to me? Or is it a post-Modern poem that focused on the individual's paradigm and the author as she/he was writing is no longer the same as now/and their meaning?I wanna know what it meant to you.

Im extremely sorry if I come off as rude. D:
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by Blair Phoenix on Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:19 pm

Moonstone wrote:I don't mean to be the dud here, but I got several meanings out of this poem, and I'm not quite sure where you're going with this poem. I really like it! I just did not grasp the meaning as you probably implied it. At first I thought it might mean that a trans person is like everyone else...but then I was not sure.

Could you explain this to me? Or is it a post-Modern poem that focused on the individual's paradigm and the author as she/he was writing is no longer the same as now/and their meaning?I wanna know what it meant to you.

Im extremely sorry if I come off as rude. D:
That's the thing about poetry. You're encouraged to come to your own conclusion Razz
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by Rosie on Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:37 pm

I wish i knew it's concrete meaning. ;_____;
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by Blair Phoenix on Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:15 pm

Moonstone wrote:I wish i knew it's concrete meaning. ;_____;
Silly Moonstone Razz. What's the fun in that?
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Re: [Poem] She is a man

Post by Rosie on Sat Jun 02, 2012 9:23 pm

the fun in knowing of course! Very Happy
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